Tuesday, December 18, 2007

Fifth Response By: Rodney Rainey

In the story so far,things get more serious and dramatic.Everybody starts to settle down and live their new lives.If their was a chance that I had I would make teir lives more better and acceptable.The characters would live rich with little financial problems and sometimes things would go wrong at home.It would be better if I was the author of the story because the story would have much humor and detail.There would also be sad and romantic moments that would lead to good futures for the characters in the story.

1 comment:

Mr. Malley said...

Rodney, this seems a bit fluffy to me. What do you mean you'd add humor and detail? Where? Why? How? Sad moments? Romantic? Where? Why? How?